All Comments on 'Mary's Revenge'

Loved the story. I'm guessing that this won't be the last time they play this way.

That was very very Hot!!!

More more more!!!!

A fine story, but you totally lost me at a cup of semen. Come on now, not even porn stars shoot more than a tablespoon or so. If you're going to completely screw realism, why not just give him a three foot dick?

This story was amazing!! Maybe next time you can time him down and have someone else provide the facial for him? Just a suggestion. Then she can leave him after she tapes it.

"His eyes are no longer visible, his nostrils glued shut, his lips coated by cum, his hair dotted by streaks of sticky white sperm." complete and total ownage

More of these need to exist. Your writing is perfect.

I agree with the loss of realism with a cup of semen, but other than that, I loved the story. The one thing missing is him having to breathe through his mouth with his nostrils glued shut. She had to and got cum in her mouth. He should have, too. After all, this IS revenge. Great story, write more, please.

i would let my wife do this to me.

Great story ... love the theme and not too heavy on the femdom

Great story.

Turn about is fair play. Nothing better than to be teased over and over before having an orgasm in an unexpected way.

why you receive praise for this story i will never know

Unless she's a big girl or he's a small man there's no way she locks his legs like you described. The minute he saw what she had in mind, a simple straightening of his legs and a twist of his waist puts the cum either on the bed or the floor. And then I'd be interested in whether he talked to her or simply threw her out. I'm thinking she's out the door.

Pack your things and get out, We're done. I'll skip the part where he simply straightens out his legs and throws her off. What is she? A professional wrestler? That just made me laugh. But continuing on, she's history. What a bitch. Stupid story not worth the time spent reading it.

What's sauce for the goose, is sauce for the gander. Gives a whole new meaning to sexual intercourse as a shared experience, didn't it?

My wife could do this to me, she is a little bigger than i and she could put me in this position if she wanted, and secretly I wouldn't mind.

Being a man who loves cum, and sucking dicks, your story was superb. I loved it, and your writing is very erotic and descriptive. Your story make me so hard. . . I wish Josh was filling my mouth with his ocean of cum.

HAHAHAH BEAUTIFUL SEXY KARMIC 10/10 LMAO I dig it. You might uh have made me acquire a new fetish now I think lol