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third dip and swallow

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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/09/05

1201 in 2001

she dances with words
from the the future
to the prehistoric past
you are my monolith
of words, my GAL
talk to me in space

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by Anonymous05/09/05

&

Stunning anna.. a swirling write of depth and fantastic reality of the personality ...depth and musical
thank you for the read
du lac~

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by duckiesmut05/09/05

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Your poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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by Anonymous05/09/05

delicious poem

except that "day-old cud" part! Beautiful mages throughout, anna.

Fly

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by Reltne05/09/05

5

Why am I not permitted to vote on this masterpiece?

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by mischievousgrin05/09/05

hell yeah

crushed raspberries and cave walls, honey I am THERE!

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by ishtat05/10/05

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Bloody Excellent!

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by Tathagata05/11/05

you could

have stopped with the first two verses and it would have been a great poem.

Some great images ( i like the "cud" part)
I just want to know whose footsteps you saw??
Thank you

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by Anonymous05/13/05

yeah

yeahyeahyeah

that's what i say when i come.

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