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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/09/05

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Hot... great style and once again love the stopping and voyeurism of the moment
du lac~

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by duckiesmut05/09/05

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Your poem was mentioned in Monday's New Poems Reviews.

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by Wanton Vixxxen05/10/05

Breaths may calm...

but heat rises sharply in this poem of impending eroticism. You have a way of getting to the point in few, but powerful words lately, K. And as much as I enjoy your "flavorful" mode of poetry, this style leaves Me drooling in a different way . This was sensuous!

Vixxx

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by twelveoone03/27/11

fatwa?

OK, not expected, works 5

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