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Delightful!
I'm exhausted from my own, er, manipulations, after reading that. So beautiful, such nice people, such graphic and realistic detail, all combine to give a perfect experience. :-)
Thank You !!
I am an old man who spends a lot more time looking than touching, and this story makes that status, not so bad after all.
Beautiful
What a beautiful story. I am a man and love my ass to be plyed with this has just made me want it more. The story is well written and I enjoyed every minute of it. All lovers will want to get on with it after reading this. I even enjoyed the fart
Thanks
Superior writing
I loved the pace of the story and the expressive dialog. From someone who has never had the experience described, I felt like I got a great idea of what it's like.
Incredible Job!!
As one who loves to "give" but doesn't have a huge amount of experience, this was a gold mine of information on how to do it right. The shower and bedroom scenes were totally hot. Very likable characters too. Terrific description with incredible 5 plus writing. I can't wait to read your other works.
Wonderfully Written
The dialog between the characters is a work of art and the sex is explosive. You feel as if you are a fly on the wall throughout the entire story. This is erotica at its best.
speechless..
breathless as well if you catch my drift =) im beginning to fall in love with your writings..3rd piece to recieve a 5 from me. i am looking forward for more
Quite the story
There are very few stories on this site with realistic and different characters, or with any kind of development of said characters. Keep writing like this, you're raising the bar for the rest of this site!
respectful
what a really nice build up to a great culmination. particularly thought the descriptions built the scenes really well. thank you.
Dirty,but nice
Very dirty,very nice
Love, lust and
life lessons, are all rolled this lovely, erotic piece. This was excellently done. I just love when dialogue is done well, and yours is among the best. The character development of the main character is encouraging and believable. Seeing her make life decisions for herself is inspiring (of course, the scene confronting the parents will be even more dramatic).
The curiosity as she approached anal play/love was realistic, and you used it well to show us how deeply lustful she was for sexual fulfillment. The scene in the office when they decided to call out sick was quintessential first-time desire. The rest of the sex scenes were excellent, and her orgasm was, well, orgasmic.
OK. I'm going on and on. The story rocked. Your writing is awesome. Please keep writing.
Wow!
That was explosively intoxicating.
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