A Master's Ring: Book 03

confuzed

dang, i have read this series a couple times in part, and every time i get confused. wheels within wheels, benrath! it is a labyrinth of implied and psych messages i am not reading and understanding - almost like a sci fi story based on aliens with alien psych - except those i can ususally figure out.

the way El Sol's characters think & plan is beyond me, most frustrating.

still, well written as always.

Another great installment

This series just keeps getting better. But I'd like to see two things. One, a nemesis for David as bad as he is.
His "I'm tougher than god act is wearing a little thin". Someone his equal as a killer would be welcome, especially
if that person is an outsider(not part of the society).
Second, I'd like more explanation of the gifts and what they entail, especilly the Elizabeths. You keep hinting but giving very little. Always just a taste, like Iane's power. More info please. But other than that, great work, keep it up.

Very enjoyable

i have read all three installments so far and all i can say is stunning, i have created some stories in my time but this is as close to a masterpiece. Compared to the other stories on this site this blows them all out of the water by a long way, i hope that you can keep up the twists and turns, as they are being to intrest me, i would like to see where you are taking this.


The Commander stands for the virtues of wisdom, sincerely, benevolence, courage and strictness. SUN TZU ON THE ART OF WAR.

Damn

I read the first part of this series less then a week ago. That was after finding the second installment that had just been posted. After reading the second I was seriously bummed out because I thought it would take a good bit of time for the next book. All I have to say is THANK YOU. Unlike the last poster I love the plot twists .... things dont seem to make since until you read another 12 chapters ... even spanning across books. I have no doubt that eventually all the loose ends will come together and I cannot wait.

Outstanding.

I'm hooked. I'm so hooked on the story that I find myself skimming the sex to get to the plot. I don't know how much of this you already have written, but I'll be sad when it stops. I'm fascinated by the world of the Brotherhood you've created, and I can't wait to learn more of its history. I'm also looking forward to whatever crisis David will have to go through.

Your writing is outstanding, and the story so far is excellent. I'm waiting with great anticipation for Chapter 4.

Thank you for sharing such an excellent work with us, and for the significant effort and time you've put into this.

RedJohnny

Keeps getting better and better...

This story keeps getting better and better. The plot twists, intrigue, and lets not forget the sex. Like other people have stated I am going to miss this story when it ends.

The brotherhood continues

I finished the story Friday but just didn't have time to respond. After reading a few of the other comments I must agree that this has continued to be a very well written story. There have been a few parts within your story where I wasn't quite following the thought process you were intending the audience to comprehend. The one in particular was when they were at the dojo fighting. I either misread or the action sequence was to be assumed. I'm not quite sure. This has happend on other ocassions where you implied a psychologic thought process and then left it open ended, only to be answered later on in your next submission.
Respectfully,
Smmale2003

Incredible

I stumbled upon this story in my readings and have eagerly digested all 3 in 3 days, I Must say the plot twists, story developement and highs and lows of the story are as as deep and catching as the characters. The sex in the stories is secondary to the exceptional writing and story, I cannot wait to read more.

Maraxis

wow

actually so well written that the sex is secondary to the plot. every day i check and see if the new book 4 has been posted . cant wait for the culmination of the plot

Bring on Book 4

Good stuff. Can't wait for the next one! ASAP - I lose my internet connection when i go home for summer! Keep it coming anyway. Nothing confusing about it, as some of the other posts suggest, there were a few bits I had to re-read as I lost it, but that was probably my eyes yelling at me to stop staring at the computer screen!

Thank you

Thank you for your wonderful novel! I have enjoyed all three parts and look forward to the fourth installment. I was tempted to leave a comment after reading Book 2, but chickened out. I'm sorry that I did not give you a compliment sooner. *blush*
I have found the story very interesting and engaging. At times I have felt hot and flushed and other times frightened of my physical reactions to the actions of the main character. Your writing is wonderful!

Fantastic Story

This is the first comment that I have posted and I have only two things to say. I love this story and I sincerly hope that you will write book 4.

wow

Well, I was looking for something to read and I became completely engrosed. At first I thought that the cold scenes were a bit wierd, but somehow it has drawn me in deeper to the David character. I still can't completely figure out what the purpose of the lack of emotion is, since it seems like a tragic flaw, but is not used as one. I think that that curiosity drives me on to see what is going to happen. I hope this continues as long as you have idea.

Some of Part four is already out

At www.storiesonline.com there are already four chapters written.

MORE MORE MORE

please give me more of this story. the wait is killing me!

more

what other sites is book four posted at? the one site from below doesn't show anything but i really would like more of this story and late november or later is a long time to wait but i understand the reasons why. i still would like a taste of the future of this story.

More?

Is there ever going to be another installment? It's been way too long since the last one and I am beginning to feel like the author has given up.

Thank you!

I have been completely obsessed by this story since I found it yesterday. Now that I have finished the current three parts, I'll be waiting on pins and needles for the next installment. Thank you for sharing this story!

Amazing

this story waz simply amazing....i loved every second reading it.....the characters!.....the society!....the sex!......where did u every come up with the idea for the brotherhood?.....the siblings?.....i would love 2 hear more of this story.......im sure everyone would.....please dont give up in writing these stories......they are great.....i hope 2 read a PART 4......im so interested in your work im goin 2 read any other stories you have posted.....hope 2 hear more of you soon.....thank you.......bye

Nice story arc

I liked this story but when is the next portion coming out?

when?

how soon for chapter four?

Amazingly complex!

The whole series is amazingly written! I have read many different types of books and this series keeps suprising me every time I read it! It is complex as well as captivating and it keeps the reader asking for more!!!

layers..

There are _so_ many layers to this story. I'm reading it now for the 5th time and discovering still more things.

I have to wonder at times if there was a purpose behind this story (besides the writing of an excellent story) and what it was. Whatever it may have been, the amount of .. knowledge I've gotten from it is incredible.

Greatness

This series is the best piece of writing I have encountered on this site. I hope the long wait for more is because of your obvious refusal to do less than your best work.

My Eternal Gratitude

Still I have tears and all I can say is thank you. More than I ever could give would be rquired of me to repay you. Thank you again from the depths of what I am.

Forever will I remain...

-Just @ Fan

Good and bad

I loved this story. I couldn't step away from it. And that is why it's so bad. Your writing has made me procrastinate on two major assignments for my college courses.

So thank you, and I sincerely hope the next one comes soon - preferably when I don't have work due!

Awesome!

Oh my God! This has got to be one of the best stories I have read on this board! I can't tell you how many times I stayed up all night just to finish the parts.

Is this going to be a book?? Please say yes...Brother!

Amazing!

I started your series a few days ago and as well as many other readers found myself staying up til 4am one night and 6am another night just to read til I could no longer keep my eyes open. I am completely captivated by the story! Can't wait for the next one!

More... Please?

I've just reread the searies so far... can't wait for the next installment.!

Bloody good read

Looking forward to book four with baited breath more Anna please that old lady is a dangerous formidable lovable old Bitch. more of the Jason back story as well if it will not spoil the plot lines. Damn fine read though could do with a more through editing but I have loved each book so far would love to see all of the story bound and in hard copy.

Written by a master

Great writing. This belongs on the shelf of a bookstore in Times Square.

Thanks

THank you for writing such an excellent series. It is great and I hope that it will continue.

Bloody good read

Great series I just reread the current parts and i can't wait for the fourth installment

Great Story of Ownership

At the beginning of the story I was sure it might bore me, but after the second chapter i could not get enough. I told my sister about it and we have been reading the story together. I cannnot wait for the next book. thank you for sucha great read and some good sex mixed in.

continue please

would be a shame to not finish this one ...

Flipping Brilliant

Oh my god, seriosuly why is this story not finished I want more. Please please please finish it.

Incredible.

This is probably the best erotic fiction I've ever read... amaaazing story line, incredibly intricate and always surprising. I can't even explain how depressed I felt after seeing that the last book was posted in 05 - I NEED the ending!!

Fantastic!!!

Have been checking back for updates ever since I read it. Seriously hope this series will be completed despite the last update being 3 years ago

Amazing

I have been reading nonstop for almost an entire day...your story basically consumed my life haha PLEASE finish, I would love to even have one more chapter

I found Book 4

If you check his info elsol said it was because there are charcters under 18 in book so so he cant post it to this site, but he has posted it and if you search for You can find it. I did.

book 4????

where can this be located

Book 4!?

I've only ever seen 4 chapters of book 4on SOL. if anyone has seen more please say where. Thanks in advance and for others for any new info.

There are a few chapters of Part 4 on Stories On Line.

The book is still not finished though and it has been years since any additions were made to the story at SOL too.

Where's the rest?

Where is Book 4? I'm actually reading this series for the plot & characterization; you're good! Where's the rest? You have me hooked.

To Be Continued, apparently not :(

very well done great series, pity there isn't more : /

See SOL for more

The author's blog on SOL (http://storiesonline.net/library/authorBlog.php?i d=1534) has an entry from July 2, 2010, "I will then finish A Master's Ring (For real!). I will then be done with my sex writing."

So check over there for updates.

Great series or novella...

It it well written and the characters are well developed. I some time had to re-read the dialogue several times before I could follow it. I have not read other things the author has written but look forward to it if they are on the same par as this.

This is my favorite story as of yet I am heartbroken that I cannot finish it.

Definitely Worth Finishing

I can see potentials for finishing this well. It's been great so far. Please come back to this. It's worth it.

Great Story

What a great tale. The volume of sex in the tale is unfortunate, not because it is superfluous, but it narrows the audience who would read it. You have talent my friend.