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This is an amazing story
This needs to be finished. I loved every minute of reading this great tale. I need to know how this ends.
Elsol, if you\\\'re reading this, PLEASE FINISH IT!
Please....!!!!
Finish your story and don't let your fans down. The story needs an ending. Your gift for writing is amazing.
When reading this story you tend to think, witch would i be, I Brother or a sibling. I'm still not sure of the choice i would make, or that i have made. But in any case this is a great book, i would love to see it published. I hope that you are will sens your last post was back in 05. I wish you well, though i'm say so because i want to see the end. Tad selfish of me isn't it.
More Please
I think this is the best set of stories I've read here. Not just the sex scenes, but the overall quality of the characters and plotlines as well. I'm very disappointed that it hasn't been finished (or even just continued). There seems so much potential in the characters and plotlines to take it in so many directions.
If you are reading this elsol please pick up your quill and pen another few pages.
very good!
love it!
Wow
Amazing depth of character and plot - filled with numerous erotic scenes to boot!! Truly a masterpiece erotic novel - sadly incomplete, but I couldn't stop reading once I got started... thanks for the ride.
A continuing
elsol has more for this series at storiesonline.net, search the authors and you will find elsol and more of his fantastic story. see you there!
best ever
one of the best stories to date i have read on this site. I went to the site metioned in a comment below and he has started a book 4 with a few chapters in it but as it stands i doubt it will be finished but i will watch and hope he does finish it cause i absolutely love this book
Over the top
You are clearly an excellent author but, for my taste, you have reversed the role of the Entree and the Dessert . The theme or story should be the Entree and the Sex should be the Dessert. Instead you have an endless series of repetitious sexual escapades sparsely interspersed with bits of the story. The sex instead of being stimulating turned out to be mostly boring after the first few trysts. Used judiciously, it would have been delicious. Less can be more. Just my two cents. I loved the story though.
Thanks - Great Read
Great read. When you first introduced the Jason character it seemed meaninglessly psychotic but every little branch in the plot is brilliantly meshed into a masterwork. Some of the dialogue is a little overbearing even for an Any Ryan novel but – I read every chapter. Honestly, I was skipping sex senes the main story line was so enthralling. So thank you hope you continue this insightful Saga.
Amazing!!!
Amazing read. The stories have had me wrapped for weeks. Can't wait for book 4!
I have finished reading the whole story.
While some may not agree with me, the final portion of the story was written and can be found as mentioned below; but you have to register to read it.
The way it finishes leaves it open to a continuing story; however, upon reading it and considering it, it is done and needs go no further. It is a good place to stop. Remember, no story ends really. Only the writing of it. It's worth the read. It's worth the closure.
This has been an excellent story over all. I'm glad I found it rather than missed it. Finding the final chapters was necessary and gave me closure.
great read
I'm not sure when you plan on book 4 but so far this is a great story, can't wait for the addtional chapters!!!
Captivated by the story
I couldn't stop reading it. I got lost a couple of times and had to reread. But I hope to read the final chapters.
Will there ever be more?
I have recently re-read A Master's Ring for the third or fourth time and was wondering if you had ever finished book 4. If you have, have you posted it at another location or possibly gotten it published. I would really like to see this story completed with all of the additional chapters required to complete Davids story, along with more of his backstory.
storiesonline.net
Its not finished but does go farther. The author has been sick but not updated this story in years. He has posted many other good stories since.
Is the book for sale in Amazon legit?
There is a copy of this book sold in amazon. Has anybody purchased it? Is it complete?
Link: http://www.amazon.com/A-Masters-Ring-ebook/dp/B00A MSLJIM/ref=sr_1_1?s=digital-text&ie=UTF8&qid=13683 36515&sr=1-1
suplication
one of the best reads on this site imho, please gimme more, stuff the chocolate,cocaine,heroine and nicotine, not interested but pls gimme more in the series, book 4 through to 50 might be enough> i am addicted
We need book 4 please
Loved this series
please consider completing book 4
david
Great Story
Absolutely loved this series, can't wait for the next story! Best story I have read on this site!!!
love the story
will this be continued??
book 4?
If you look at story page nothing added since the year 2005 so dont get your hopes up but Elsol still posts on SOL but not this story.
Wonderful reading!
I must comment on your wrifgting, I was not disappionted from the first word to the last. I can't wait for more. You really have a flare for ceelong the reader inthriled in your work. Please keep it up. I think if you quit wrighting it would be a very great loss of a talented wrighter!
Ridiculous
The amount of stories that go unfinished on this site is ridiculous.
Dont get ur hopes up...
This book will not be completed. Its the same with its other version on SOL too. This author has been atleast active there, posting other stories. Here he doesnt even reply to readers' comments. This book has been incomplete since 2005 and since then he's posted atleast 15 other stories. Even after so many requests from so many fans he hasnt taken any interest in completing the story. He just says he'll do it and has been dragging the same line for the past 10 years, in the mean while, planning other story plots and releasing other stories.
Dont get me wrong, I am not whining or criticising the author. After all he gives away his stories for free. But I am just being a realist and giving up on it. Just imagine yourself, if you have been a student sometime, going back to some subject (obviously not some easy 2nd grade subject, but something you needed a lot of effort to study!!) you studied/wrote about 10 years ago and if you want to go back to it and write about it, how much interested will you be ? How much will you remember ? Will you even have the same mind set after 10 years !? I am damn sure you wont. Its the same with him in my opinion. Hence saying that you wont get nay more updates on it.
Anyway, thanks to the author for having given a good work which we could enjoy for a while atleast.
Continuation
I wish you hade continued this incredible story.
A Master's Ring Book 04: Of Siblings and siblings
"A Master's Ring Book 04: Of Siblings and siblings" can be found at this link. (http://storiesonline.net/sex-story/41195) you'll have to become a member to read it. don't worry it's a free membership.
Great story
Amazing story , really love it. It is just unfortunate that you have not posted all of it on this site.
😥
It's to bad you have stopped writing. The stories I have read really great.
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