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HarryHillHarryHillover 5 years ago
Did not know what to make of it a first...

but at last I got it. Each two lines are like a haiku, very temporal I believe is what I'm trying to say, then each lead from heart break, to love, to closure. Very nicely done and different from the other one of yours I've read. All the marbles.

HarryHillHarryHillover 5 years ago
My comments are gone

my appreciation for the at first unseen craft is not.

legerdemerlegerdemerover 5 years ago
Fickle poet

But not to the muse. I really like the playfulness. It reads like the parting words of a Don Juan blowing a kiss over his shoulder as he redirects his sights elsewhere. Well done.

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