All Comments on 'Dreams of Kerry'

Well written. Thanks.

One of best written stories I’ve read on Literotica.

Well crafted piece of writing

Thank you

loved it, great buildup loved there were no huge cocks or tits that always ruins the story for me

Very well written. You should write a book 😉

... every single one of the five stars - even more!

One of the best stories ever. Well done!

It was perfect. There were no unrealistic standards and the way you connected everything was even more amazing, I just wished it didn't have to end... But non the less I loved it

This story seems so realistic, it could be an autobiographical account. If not, you certainly have a knack for writing realistic scenes.

I thoroughly enjoyed the story--and thanks for posting it.

To be totally honest I’ve never read anything on this site but now I am glad I did. It was a very well written story. An because of that I totally going to read more. Not because of the sexy scene but because I gives hope to everybody that’s misses an old best friend.

A believably realistic love story. Either this is based on truth, or you have an incredibly imaginative romantic streak that should be expanded to a career in mainstream story telling! You would be on the best seller’s list in no time!

My second of your stories.

ALL to follow!

Thank you.

It's pretty good. But I had to take away a point for your horrible beginning.

Throughout the story, you have flashbacks to when they were growing up together. But you started out the story with Sam not being able to recognize Kerry until she names herself to jog his memories?

COME ON!!!! I had a friend during high school that wasn't particularly close. But I ran into her again two years after graduation. I recognized her immediately and decided to seduce her. We fucked three times before she broke up with me for an older guy, mainly because she wanted to get away from her abusive father and this guy was living in the state capital 150 miles away. We didn't speak or see each other for 11 years. I was at a Blockbuster with a friend who struck up a conversation with her because he recognized her as the ER nurse who had tended to him 6 months earlier. I recognized her again immediately and we resumed our affair for several months until I got serious about the girl I was dating. But we still remained friends.

So don't try to convince me that Sam doesn't recognize his BEST friend after a three year absence. Bullsnot! 4/5

Good piece.

Another great one!

5

ScottishTexan complained that Sam should/would have recognized Kerry instantly after only three years - actually it was six - fall of sophomore year in high school to fall senior year in college (three years of high school and another three of college) but even so he's right. I went to my high school class' fortieth reunion. I'd seen none of them for thirty six years, and most not since the summer after graduation, yet there were none of the forty odd classmates whom I did not recognize instantly. Five years later I met the guy who was my closest friend for the first time in forty plus years and recognized his voice when he called out to me - in fact I could recognize the voices of just about every one of my classmates without seeing them. I think Sam would have had no difficulty recognizing Kelly's voice

I think there is a mistake in the story. He dated Melissa for nearly a year and was never at her home?! Come on!

So that is where he should have meet Kerry much earlier.

It seems you have a lot of plot holes with this one. I tend to agree.

Still worth 5