The story is technically well executed, decent grammar, etc. However, it is criminally light on setup. The characters live in the porn universe, where everybody is impulsive and nobody is introspective. If you can get past that, the imagery plays out exactly like a porn. If you're already in the mood and all you need is a little push over the edge, this is the story for you.
For someone so young that was a rough cut to fuck three boys/men without complaint and then enjoy it. Mike must have read up on her record and knew she would do something like this.
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Sparse setup but good mechanics
The story is technically well executed, decent grammar, etc. However, it is criminally light on setup. The characters live in the porn universe, where everybody is impulsive and nobody is introspective. If you can get past that, the imagery plays out exactly like a porn. If you're already in the mood and all you need is a little push over the edge, this is the story for you.
A rough cut
For someone so young that was a rough cut to fuck three boys/men without complaint and then enjoy it. Mike must have read up on her record and knew she would do something like this.
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