by WL Chastain
I liked this story. It was different from others. A good showing for a first-time submitter. Only thing I need to be critical of is the weight issue part, why interrupt a story about a character's past? Unless you plan on exploring it more in a subsequent story?
I think it is very offensive that the writer thinks that women that are the bigger ladies cannot enjoy sex just as much as a woman with a trim figure. that is a bunch of BS. if you have a good partner it can be just as enjoyable.
My friend Alex is overweight and one of the sexiest women I know and lots of men seem to agree with me.
Plus,
whether one gets turned on by what one sees or what one feels has nothing do with gender.
It's different for every person.
That was so annoying to read.