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by Maria239405/13/05

:)

wow, this must have took some thought. I love how you wove the horrifying creatures into thought/fear creatures. I might change a word or two, ( timorously, being one...) I hate looking up words, lol, but this is a unique, very visual poem. enjoyed it :)

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by Selena_Kitt01/13/06

Enthralled

I can only dream of writing poetry like this. I'm awed. I was drawn to it because of the title (namesake and all :) and then fell into this poem like Alice through the Looking Glass. Fantastic work, going to read more of your stuff!

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by impressive01/13/06

WTF?

Non-Erotic ??? C'mon, Luc! Very nice work. ~Imp

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