by scouries
Great story, waiting for the next chapter. Hope it is soon.
the first. I guess there are two possible reasons: 1. Everyone is so anxious to get to the next hot portion, they skip the comment section. If so, the last part should have lots of comments. 2. With 4 chapters readers may think this is an extremely long story and are bypassing it for shorter reads. I like the story, and love how they get quickly to the sex - probably a bit unrealistic, but who cares, it's erotic literature. So, from chapter 1, when Uncle was going to have her fucked by handsome strangers in a couple of weeks, he said he would be fucking her by the end of the day...and he DID! Now what comes next?
Deflowering his niece did not take long - so now what? It will be interesting to see if you have something unusual happen.
I think this series of short stories may have been the first ones Jim Scouries published; they are certainly about the oldest ones on this site. There are a few rough edges here that disappear in later works, which are universally excellently written. Still, this series is a fun read by itself!
I agree with Iwilton. These are obviously early stories. His writing has improved so much since "Uncle Joe's Niece". I skipped around, reading stories scattered throughout his list of writingsat first. I enjoyed them so much I decided to start at the top and read them all. This series is by far the roughest I've read from Mr. Scouries. I'm sure there will be a few more like this later. None-the-less, Mr. Scouries is one of my favorite authors on Lit. I only wish he was still writing.
Another very good chapter. I look forward to reading the rest. I appreciate your and your Muse's imagination and abilities to bring it to your story. Thank you for sharing your vision and talents.