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This is very well written and seems so effortless. I love this word: susurrus. I used that the word in a poem, recently, but removed it. The poem wasn't suited for it. It's perfect in yours. Thanks for the read.

Well written, really

enjoyed reading this.

Great work.

Thanks.

~ J

What a wonderful poem! I read it twice, and just love it. I like your free verse style, and it was easy to read and understand.

Favorite lines-

The whisper of possibility,

a susurrus rhyme telling us all

to be not afraid,

take a two step breath

and cling to the stillness.

Great poetry!

I have a tough time getting a handle on this, doesn't matter, everything is woven together nicely, a tapestry of sound (s).

It's poems like this that keep me still a groupie, Liar.

"In that quiet tick

one voice might say

yes"

in all things there is possibility. in the stillness, to think of it not happening...what if...

wonderfully done. this might be the very first poem i have ever read where i can say...i totally get it, even if on my own level.

Kudos

and thank you.

If only ... *sigh*

This one's going in my Favorites (since it's already under my skin).

~ Imp

Crapola