All Comments on 'Mmmmmm'

Reading this, I can think of several constructive comments I could make. But I'm getting ready to leave for the day, and darn it, I don't have time. I'll try to email you later. Or you may want to post this on the poetry board for some feedback. You'll get great suggestions there. Keep writing! :)

Steamy and sexy and

very erotic! Got

me in the mood lol.

Thanks.

~J

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM you have BEEN there! I can tell! every word every syllable screams out that you are speaking from the heart (or at least from the gut)...and you loved every aching breaking second of it...!!!

This was truly mmmmmmmmagnificent. LOL!