All Comments on 'Aesthetics'

by Sabina_Tolchovsky

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Syndra LynnSyndra Lynnalmost 19 years ago
wow!

I really enjoyed this!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Languid...

...and exposed before the phallic lens! You seduced me!

b'brig

TathagataTathagataalmost 19 years ago
the last two

~Compositions of

gelatin silver emotion.

Washes,

to expose the sin.

I lay more than just my body

before your lens. ~

This was so fluid and seamless that it makes the beginning feel a little rough.

I love " gelatin silver emotion"

Thank you

My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
asthetics

I gotta go get my dictionary, Ill be back~

ishtatishtatalmost 19 years ago
#

Bit unsure about the stanza beginning 'Esthetic expositor' but the end from 'compositions' on is shimmery super.

christcat69christcat69almost 19 years ago
Oh yes

uhhmm...mmmmmm.........delicious

twelveoonetwelveoonealmost 19 years ago
*

After the first fourlines, you pulled this off quite well.

The first four lines, gave me a bad feeling of deja vu.

Very strong ending.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
aestheticly

pleasing

AmyfriendAmyfriendover 15 years ago
Very nice

I really enjoyed this one.

Anonymous
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