All Comments on 'Hooded Whir'

Liked it alot.

Gaping lips barbed on entry

Heave to greet, undulate to shun.

Hysterical shrieks nailed in silk

Loved that bit.

Nice work.

Thanks.

~ J

Nasty and hardcore. That's fine as long as you can write nasty and hardcore and do it well.

a trip into, your poetry, thank you