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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C05/14/05

Short

but very powerful and
thought provoking.
Liked it.
Thank you.
~ J

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by My Erotic Tale05/14/05

sunrise

jimmy the sun?

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by twelveoone05/14/05

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Unless I am missing the juxtaposition, these insights would be better in the context of a larger piece. They are tough to do in English, the nuances are not there.

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