Damn, the one description of the "liquid" getting ready to launch was great and fit in with the story in more ways than one!
Damn, I think I forgot to log in on the that PC I just made!
You have to get the rest of the story out ASAP. :)
Great beginning, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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Excellent story
Damn, the one description of the "liquid" getting ready to launch was great and fit in with the story in more ways than one!
Excellent story
Damn, the one description of the "liquid" getting ready to launch was great and fit in with the story in more ways than one!
bearlee-it's me LOL
Damn, I think I forgot to log in on the that PC I just made!
Very Impressive
You have to get the rest of the story out ASAP. :)
Tease
Great beginning, can't wait to read the next chapter.
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