by templeminded
okay I bite! <grin>
love your tail, I meant tale, okay I meant tail too.
A wild and exciting night or a dream?
Hopping story, great build up, yummy action!
You could have used a lil bit of editing help to clean up some tense conflicts in a few places, but overall a juicy read!
good job Nin... proud of your first write girl.. I can see you letting go now in with your vivid lust! Very hot and oh... so spontaneous. good job girl
du~
I like the way she looked at the two initially, felt she should leave them alone, and then couldn't stop looking.