All Comments on 'Just the Three of Us'

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My Erotic TaleMy Erotic Talealmost 19 years ago
yummy

okay I bite! <grin>

love your tail, I meant tale, okay I meant tail too.

A wild and exciting night or a dream?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Nice story!

Hopping story, great build up, yummy action!

You could have used a lil bit of editing help to clean up some tense conflicts in a few places, but overall a juicy read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
yummy

excellent story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
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good job Nin... proud of your first write girl.. I can see you letting go now in with your vivid lust! Very hot and oh... so spontaneous. good job girl

du~

FifthFlowerFifthFlowerover 16 years ago
Nice story

I like the way she looked at the two initially, felt she should leave them alone, and then couldn't stop looking.

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