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Just the Three of Us

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by My Erotic Tale05/21/05

yummy

okay I bite!
love your tail, I meant tale, okay I meant tail too.
A wild and exciting night or a dream?

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by Anonymous05/21/05

Nice story!

Hopping story, great build up, yummy action!

You could have used a lil bit of editing help to clean up some tense conflicts in a few places, but overall a juicy read!

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by Anonymous05/22/05

yummy

excellent story

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by Anonymous05/22/05

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good job Nin... proud of your first write girl.. I can see you letting go now in with your vivid lust! Very hot and oh... so spontaneous. good job girl
du~

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by FifthFlower10/20/07

Nice story

I like the way she looked at the two initially, felt she should leave them alone, and then couldn't stop looking.

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