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That didn't quite work as planned... sigh.
The heart was suppose to be next to the arrow. Oh, well. I tried. :D ~Minx
It may not have come out as you'd expected,
but it's still a lovely and touching tribute. =0)
I'd say it worked out well
With the heart on a line of it's own it stands out more. Like the answer to a riddle. Either way it's nicely done.
stages
A little girl going her formative stages to growing up. This poem points out the many facets that occur in a young girl's early life. Beautifully illustrated.
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At first I saw the double acrostic but I was wondering about all those asterisks until I saw your comment and took a more long-distance look and saw the arrow. I see what you were trying to do; I think it would've looked great that way ~ if only...
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At first I saw the double acrostic but I was wondering about all those asterisks until I saw your comment and took a more long-distance look and saw the arrow. I see what you were trying to do; I think it would've looked great that way ~ if only...
Youth is so sweet...
and mothers guidance is a must.
A CHIP OFF THE BLOCK
and an apple near a tree. TK U MLJ LV NV
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