It might be a good story, but I don't know. When the spelling is this poor, I stop reading. Please don't rely on spellcheck. It approves errors like "through" for "threw".
Either have an editor check it or have a friend read it -- maybe your brother?
With this story setting, your spelling is a minor thing. Please continue with it, letting us see you fucking your sister-in-law at every opportunity, with her ovaries "swimming" in your cum. You might want to introduce your wife into the story as a willing partner for you to fuck your sister-in-law and making a baby (or two) in lieu of the wife having to put up with pregnancy and condoning her sister having your babies for the time being until such time as the wife decides she wants to have a baby further down the line. At which time your and your sister-in-law's baby(ies) could be born male which could then grow up to make babies with your wife...just an idea....
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Anonymous05/20/05
what's the relationship?
Not bad at all, although I was mostly just skimming. One detail you didn't really explain -- if she's his sister-in-law, is she his brother's wife? or his wife's sister? I assume the first since there's nothing about his wife... but there's no mention of her husband, either.
Would've been hotter with some comments about (brother, wife, whoever).
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Anonymous01/01/11
Great story
Great story. Wish there had been some additional chapters detailing the rest of the summer.
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Anonymous03/09/11
verry good
this sounds more like a true story was it email me at samhop42@hotmail.com
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Anonymous03/22/11
Didn't take English lessons?
Do you know the difference between "your" and "you're"?
"Your" = possesive. Your car, your house, etc.
"You're" = 'you are'!
How about between "throw" and "through"? Look 'em up!
And PROOF-READ!!!!!
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Anonymous04/25/13
This was boring.
I just couldn't get into it. It was totally rushed and had no immersion what so ever.
English
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It might be a good story, but I don't know. When the spelling is this poor, I stop reading. Please don't rely on spellcheck. It approves errors like "through" for "threw".
Either have an editor check it or have a friend read it -- maybe your brother?
Very, Very, Very, Very good!
With this story setting, your spelling is a minor thing. Please continue with it, letting us see you fucking your sister-in-law at every opportunity, with her ovaries "swimming" in your cum. You might want to introduce your wife into the story as a willing partner for you to fuck your sister-in-law and making a baby (or two) in lieu of the wife having to put up with pregnancy and condoning her sister having your babies for the time being until such time as the wife decides she wants to have a baby further down the line. At which time your and your sister-in-law's baby(ies) could be born male which could then grow up to make babies with your wife...just an idea....
what's the relationship?
Not bad at all, although I was mostly just skimming. One detail you didn't really explain -- if she's his sister-in-law, is she his brother's wife? or his wife's sister? I assume the first since there's nothing about his wife... but there's no mention of her husband, either.
Would've been hotter with some comments about (brother, wife, whoever).
Great story
Great story. Wish there had been some additional chapters detailing the rest of the summer.
verry good
this sounds more like a true story was it email me at samhop42@hotmail.com
Didn't take English lessons?
Do you know the difference between "your" and "you're"?
"Your" = possesive. Your car, your house, etc.
"You're" = 'you are'!
How about between "throw" and "through"? Look 'em up!
And PROOF-READ!!!!!
This was boring.
I just couldn't get into it. It was totally rushed and had no immersion what so ever.
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