All Comments on 'The Maiden of Hawaii'

in your voice that is...sliky island breeze...warm and soft and sensuous...

lovley voice, lovley poem...

excellent poem~ a very lucious lou-al <grin>

the maiden of hawaii >> a slice of island smile

<grin> gotta lay? <<spell check=grin>

A nice tropical offering.

paint a pretty picture

with your words.

thanks.

~ J

The classic tale set in Hawaii of a gal awaiting her Prince Charming.