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by Anonymous

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U05/19/05

;)

nice to have you back babe!
i love the last 2 lines of this one!!
kisses,
T

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by msboy805/19/05

Great Writing

Your writing is very good. I could picture the two of them walking along the river.Keep writing, but watch out for those adverbs. Take care and be well.

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by Alien4705/19/05

Too cold

... in the river! Otherwise - erotic.

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by drksideofthemoon06/07/05

I Love Hiking....

:) Ya know what I mean....

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by don8765402/04/08

Now what????

We need more of this one. Perhaps the story could be continued to include more natural interludes in nude settings where a natural occurrence of fertility develops with no hinderence of birth control?

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