Yeah, let mom help you, team up, and really educate your brother. Enjoyed the story immensly. Keep writing.
Rudy
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Anonymous11/07/05
one idea
I love your stories, this one and all of the others I've read. I thought it was cool the way you posted the two "ever notice" giving us the perspectives of both characters. I would be thrilled to see you continue this story, perhaps giving us a remembered rundown of the previous weekends activity from the boys perspective before going on to the following weekend. I'm not a writer, just a fan and a newly realized anal erotic, so to read about the last weekend from his perspective would really be a treat.
you really put the wording together. I could see (& feel) everything happen. EXCELLENT!
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Anonymous09/04/06
GET SIS SOME HELP
LIKE ANOTHER COMMENTER SAID 'GET MOM TO HELP SISTER OUT' THEN MOM ASKS HER SISTER' THE BOY'S AUNT TO HELP OUT WHILE SHE'S SPENDING THE WEEKEND
DON'T FORGET TO ADD VOYEURISM
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Anonymous03/05/07
a real hot writer
very tallented, love to see what she looks like in your mind
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Anonymous03/05/07
Excellent
Excellent story. Nice and hot. Sister helping her brother get satisfaction. Nice.
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Anonymous03/06/07
What a GR8 Sis!
I wish my sis had helped ME when I'd hurt myself sk8ing! LOL Lucky guy! Maybe U can work Mom in next time, eh? Good story. I diggit! Top score, Man.
First off, I want to be reincarnated as your brother.
Second, I liked the idea of revisiting the story from the sister's point of view. Well written and the premise wasn’t too over the top, ridiculous. Unlikely to happen in reality? Probably, but aren’t about 90% of the stories on Literotica unlikely in the real world? This site is about sexual fantasies we’d like to see, and honey you do a great job writing them.
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Anonymous01/26/15
kind of DUMB
not long enough to give proper detail and HOW CAN HE SHOWER WITH CASTS ON HIS ARMS? a real screw up by the writer as usual.
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Anonymous11/21/15
Haha great read
Please ignore the other comment there. Very rude on that readers part.
English
Looks old to me
This is an old story copied over
Slight Improvement
Well, it is an improvement on her original story. It has better story elements this time. A good rewrite.
great story
Great story now get sis to talk mom into helping out.
Sweeeeet Sister
Yeah, let mom help you, team up, and really educate your brother. Enjoyed the story immensly. Keep writing.
Rudy
one idea
I love your stories, this one and all of the others I've read. I thought it was cool the way you posted the two "ever notice" giving us the perspectives of both characters. I would be thrilled to see you continue this story, perhaps giving us a remembered rundown of the previous weekends activity from the boys perspective before going on to the following weekend. I'm not a writer, just a fan and a newly realized anal erotic, so to read about the last weekend from his perspective would really be a treat.
:-)
markoff
Loved it
you really put the wording together. I could see (& feel) everything happen. EXCELLENT!
GET SIS SOME HELP
LIKE ANOTHER COMMENTER SAID 'GET MOM TO HELP SISTER OUT' THEN MOM ASKS HER SISTER' THE BOY'S AUNT TO HELP OUT WHILE SHE'S SPENDING THE WEEKEND
DON'T FORGET TO ADD VOYEURISM
a real hot writer
very tallented, love to see what she looks like in your mind
Excellent
Excellent story. Nice and hot. Sister helping her brother get satisfaction. Nice.
What a GR8 Sis!
I wish my sis had helped ME when I'd hurt myself sk8ing! LOL Lucky guy! Maybe U can work Mom in next time, eh? Good story. I diggit! Top score, Man.
I wish I had a sister like you
First off, I want to be reincarnated as your brother.
Second, I liked the idea of revisiting the story from the sister's point of view. Well written and the premise wasn’t too over the top, ridiculous. Unlikely to happen in reality? Probably, but aren’t about 90% of the stories on Literotica unlikely in the real world? This site is about sexual fantasies we’d like to see, and honey you do a great job writing them.
kind of DUMB
not long enough to give proper detail and HOW CAN HE SHOWER WITH CASTS ON HIS ARMS? a real screw up by the writer as usual.
Haha great read
Please ignore the other comment there. Very rude on that readers part.
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