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by Anonymous

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by twelveoone05/17/05

*

?
word game seems
to go
nowhere here
at least
for me

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by Anonymous05/17/05

is this a

test of why or why not, soup to nuts , alpha omega spinning wherefore art thou ...blue

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this one swirls...simple and gorgeous. Sabina

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by Anonymous05/17/05

???

I look forward to your work but I'm afraid I just don't get this one.

Maybe someone could enlighten me.

b'brig

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by hippiedude05/17/05

Cute

I'm paranoid enough to make more of this than I should - I'm certain that there is some secret message that has now penetrated my phsyche and at some point I will probably find my self walking into the bus station to fetch some mysterious package from locker "A"

Hey its okay - for you I'll do it.

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by Anonymous05/18/05

mentioned

in the review thread.

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by Bridget6905/18/05

Interesting...

concept that reminds me of the basic questions where, when, how and why?

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by Angeline05/19/05

I dig this

it is ee cummingsish to me--or like a list of sight words gone slightly mad. well done.

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by LeBroz12/09/06

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Interesting word play Jim;
Better than who, what, where, when, why, and how;
Watch the comma and then read it aloud a few times
Quick.

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by duddle14612/13/06

Why?

What? ~ and if not what - When? Color me confused. Interesting line formatting though.

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