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bad pun here
"but one by one they all leave."
I would expect that of
me
when was
the last time you hugged a tree ....you pay a nice tribute to the symbiosis of life..luv your writes...be blessed/blue
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this has some great comparison to life, nice work as always.
Sabina
waxing philosophic
nice use of something so hugely literary it might easily fall into the mundane -- You however did not let it land there -- enjoyable read my friend
great stuff
Love your ZMP poetry and this was no exception,
a really lovely interesting piece.
Thanx.
~ J
Awesome Arty~
That's what I am going to call you from now on!
What symbolic comparisons i find within these lines!
nice one buddy!
Kisses,
T
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WOW!! Super ZMP!!! So good and nice I read it 4 times all ready!!! GREAT!!! ZMA
Nice comparisons...
between leaves and the process of life and death among the human civilization and the uniqueness between individuals.
This one goes into My...
family album right in front, Art. All of your ZMP poetry is loved by Me, but this one stands out as THE one to remind Me that My family, like leaves, will all cling together on our family tree with new sprouts appearing at times and that each will be a slightly different type of leaf. You made Me cry good tears with this one, Art. Thank you.
Vixxx
yes.......
we are different.......but sometimes it seems like others want us all grouped together so they can be all to powerful. this was cool write......don
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