All Comments on 'Janie and Me: How I Lost... Ch. 03'

damn this is a hot story and the slow tease approach is killin' me!

great job can't wait for the rest!

This little epic just keeps getting hotter and hotter. Plus I think you have invented a new literary convention-The Clithanger.

by the second! or in this case the chapter!

great write!

I have 2 go read the previous 2 pages. This left me panting 4 more g on g action! OMG, so hot. I am erect 4 more. Wish it were longer, tho.

You write VERY well. Wow. I had an erection in a couple of sentences! The story was awfully SHORT, though. I thought ladies took quite a while 2 cum, honestly. Guess U R a minute-Gal, huh? sigh. Good stuff, Hon

All you can think about at this point is, bringing your partner to that same point of satisfaction that you had enjoyed from them. A true feeling of being totally full filed - consumed as it were.