My Lesbian Rape

Good story idea but....

You need an editor. There are spelling mistakes and you even wrote the wrong person's name in a spot. It made it really bad. I suggest you write it again and put alittle more effort and time on it.

Ditto on the need for editing

I couldn't get past the third paragraph because everything was all smashed together. From what I did read, you need to get your character's names straight, and use paragraph breaks.

Not Your Best

If based on fact, the trauma you experienced must be with you still.
Too much action in such short story.
Don't give up, just write, then read, and edit.
--Alece

Absolutely Disgusting

This is one of the most disgusting stories I've ever read. To glorify rape of any kind is sick and twisted. Statistics show that 30% of all Lesbians have or will be raped in their lifetime and every 30 seconds a woman is raped period.

Wow

It can't have been easy to write about this. Have you seen She Stole my Voice?

Re: Absolutely Disgusting

If you don't like stories that seem to glorify rape, why the hell are you in the NonConsent section?! Just because someone says it's based on fact, doesn't mean that it is. A lot of the time it's to make the stories seem more realistic to the reader. Maybe you should learn the difference between real rape and rape fantasies.

I personally liked the story.

wow

it got me so horny i wished i was there shoving my fist in her. great story!

cool

Cool story bro.

Hmmmm

Seems like Lisa needs to see a psycholgist and get some help. As for what happened, I find it a little too hard to believe that you went through it and although it's fiction, I know enough women to realize a woman would be ripped to shreds having that done. By the way, how does your husband feel about your past?

...WTF

I was expecting something to make my pants wet, not make me cry....

too fast

did work up to it.... happened to quickly

wow!!

those were really mean things that they did to you! i would probably would have been scared for life

it gave me a boner.

Wow

That's pretty insane...I could just picture you trying to escape.

O.o

this makes me wonna return to that time. break into the room and stab them all and save you.

Wowww

They are really freaks! l feel so bad! I wish someone could have saved you. You should have told the police!

more my pussy so wet now

That was Terrible!

I can't believe any women would find this pleasurable. That is just awful. Reading this article made me cringe. Those ladies should be very ashamed of themselves. You should have told your husband so that he could've called the police. That was just horrible. You may call that an "arousing dream", but I call that a horrific nightmare.

Wow...

I like this lol!Excpt for the pain part.

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Just awesome :)

SEXXY!!!

I wish I could have been there to watch or participate

Wow

You dykes are evil. I can't beleive you guys in enjoy this shit. I guess you are no better then men.

OMFG

U fuckin cunts how could u do that it's total rape

To the two people who commented negatively: it wasn't really "rape" because she enjoyed it in the end... it started out as such but she came so it's fine. ;)

wow

This is the best non consensual story I ve eva read. Wish that happened to me

OMG

OMG this sounds amazing i wish this happend to me. oh my god this made me horny my pantys are so fucking wet.

It doesn't matter if she liked it, if she didn't consent, it's still legally rape. Stupid -.-

Terrible

Bitch that fuckin rape

nice

this is not enough for that bitch....
pussy &ass should be fisted with two hands with nipple clamps & whipped ass...

It was so fucken hot! My pussy got wet when I read it

Wish I were her

Want that!

need a cunt to suck after reading this! my panties are soaked!

Wish that was me fingering now

Could have been better

I liked the start (by the time she was tied to the bed i was getting wet) but then it got a bit to sadistic for me. Think they cold have humiliated her by making her have forced orgasms and not so much violece. Anyone agree ?

Fuuuuuck I need someone to eat my cunt out that was hot plz continue!

private slut

that was so hot n freaky i like slutty lesbian rape my dick drips

i fill so sorry for u that should never happen to any one

I shove my old softball bat in my pussy all the time

Amazing!

This should never happen to anyone. :'( I cried while reading it; I hope the girls and Lisa go to ****. You are a brave, brave soul. Your soul is not as ripped as the raping girls; to write about it like this is even more amazing. You are truly courageous to face such awful girls. Honestly- you should get the Red Badge of Courage.

Wow...

You poor thing... No one should ever have that happen to them... I hope you're doing ok! And you're so so brave!

I came

They gave you what you deserved

As a bi female I can understand the hurt that Lisa felt when you seduced her wifie, although she should have known better than to give her heart to so young a piece of skirt.

I think you know in your heart that Lisa had a perfect moral right to administer the sexual discipline that you received. However I would not want you to feel weird about admitting to yourself that you enjoyed the forced sex, take it from me babe, its natural and healthy, and you should be grateful to Lisa and co for doing such a magnificent job of breaking you in.

I get the impression that you were dominant over Lisa's girl, well now you have learnt that you enjoy being treated like tame pussy!

Indeed you should pursue it on the fetish scene, from what I know of men, god love em, hubby would probably love to watch.

This could do your marriage a power of good, so not only have you learned a good lesson in respect and morality, but your sex live have been potentially enhanced.

Seems to me that you have a lot to thank Lisa and the other fine women for young Lady!

PS I find the comments made about your spelling and typos to be quite churlish and irrelevant

i cried

I may be a man but I feel sorry for you

Ps you women think all men are bad but all of are not

you have my sympathy

I go to rape victims and give them my sympathy.You have improved by telling your story.Telling about it is the first step.
Ps not all of us men are tamed but that doesn't mean you should give up on us,you ladies compete us.


Good luck,mazar01

Masturbait

Easy to masturbait ty ty

Woah

This quite a story.. Hoping for more >.>

WOW

I am so fucking horny. I'm naked in my room humping my pillows I really wanna get fisted now

damn

I wish my girlfriend and her friends were participating in this. That would be awesome!

Bruh

Bruhh my pillows gonna get fucked and raped tonight 😩🍑 about to make me piss on my older sisters 😼 Then go shit on my mom I once fingered my cousins but
She started shitting on me and forced me to push it into my ass

fuck

now all i can think about is slamming my fist into some girl's tiny little cunt.