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New Moon Pt. 05

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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/21/05

Nice

I am really enjoying the story so far although they could be a little longer. Instead of doing it a little at a time maybe write the next two or three and put them out as a single chapter instead of making them two or three single sections by themselves. Other than that I love this story and I hope that the next one comes out soon.

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by Anonymous05/22/05

Great!!

absolutely loved it can't wait to see more of it! :D it's a shame tho that the parts are quite short :)

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by turtledove05/22/05

Yeah!

Love the story line--but like the others--please make the segments longer--you have a BIG fan in my Darlin'-Keep up the great work!!

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