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Great work
The black bird dove
with Kamikaze dives,
Love that bit,
great read.
Thanks.
~ J
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Art,
you have been watching too much of the WWE
Sailing
Good poem. I was struck by the thought that can a pine needle sail or is its destiny to be jealous of the broadleaved trees harbouring ambitions of saildom ?
YOU are king...
of at least the tree poems lately, Art! I love the phrase, " The squirrel was tag teamed by its enemies, black birds and gravity!" I can imagine seeing that happening
this has a bit.........
predatory elements in this setting of nature you've built up here. the ending shows that predator element......nicely don.......don
Very good...
examination of territorial instincts among nature's creatures.
GRAVITY!
"The squirrel was tag teamed
by its enemies,
black birds
and gravity!"
wow...doesn't that apply to most everyone's days! LOL it's never enough for just one thing to get us down...problems crash in from all sides and truly abound!
Loved it Arty!
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