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Excellent Story
Humorous and sexy. Good job.
the personalities are a bit bizzare
strange characters, but given how hard up Arnie is, i am not surprised he agreed to marry Paige in a few months after one evening together. desperate men do desperate things.
but a follow up for these peculiar characters would be nice. why does Paige go for Arnie? does it all work out? will they divorce a year later as they realize they do not match up?
the present tense prologue "can't get a date" "won't go out" "watch tv" seem to hint that it didn't work out, that this was a flashback.....
At Last !
At last a writter that uses humor as well as an interesting story line. You are on top of my favorite list. I can say only one thing. OUTSTANDING ! ! !
Bravo!
Very clean writing. I think I've read every story you've posted on Literotica and commented on several. Every one of your postings have had an excellent story, interesting characters and a slightly tongue-in-cheek style of writing.
The earlier ones needed good editing. This story is obviously well edited and shows that you can be a damned good writer.
AHaaa - At Last a Glimpse at Where You Wrote
Newspaper columist eh - I knew it - knew you didn't chase kangaroos or crocodiles around like that guy Steve on TV.
All seriousness aside, another great job with humor on the side and vivid imagination all over. Whats especially comfortable is that you withheld pain and suffering - everyone had a good time - especially us readers!!!
More please - with high Regard
Humor and a girl that looks beyond the surface
This story has my attention! I love the way Arnie can talk about his dating, or rather the lack thereof, with such appealing humor. Paige's take charge attitude simply tells me that she's set her sights on Arnie, and there's not much he can do to get away. Hope to read more about their courtship!
Thank You, Egmont!
Great!
As others have pointed out, Sex needs Humour, and your stories hav it.
Carry on
John
Bizzar tasts
The ketup covered blow job was a real eye opener.
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