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Desperate Words

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by Anonymous

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by Jennifer C05/19/05

great stuff

Loved your choice of words
in this piece, really hit
the spot!
Thanks.
~ J

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by Bridget6905/20/05

Very nice...

contrasts in this.

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by Anonymous05/20/05

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"majesty to mockery;"

was my favorite one...

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by Sander Roscoe Wolff05/20/05

Eh...

I really wanted to like this but, at the end, felt somewhat disappointed. I kept expecting some clear conclusion, rather than endless waffling. To me, it felt more like a writing exercise than a poetical expression.

Still, keep writing, and keep posting! That's why we're all here.

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