by JA068
This has the bones of an amazing story. Very original at least. It is, however, way too jumpy and for me the transitions in scene are jarring. Nonetheless keen to hear the next installment! Why not take your time and develop each scene just a little more.
Loved the story so far AND particularly the loved your pic in your biography!
I hope you're the Jennifer in the story!
Great story and great pic of you in a bikini in your profile.
Are you the Jennifer in the story?
I love the photo that you shared for us in your bio. You have a great looking body and the knowing that you have such a great looking figure; will no doubt add to the enjoyment of reading the stories about your exposing yourself.
Thank You for sharing your photo!
disappointing stopping mid-story like that dropped from 4/5 to 3 stars, yes I agree a very great body you have there
Great start. I love the fact that Jennifer is a very fit, hot, and busty 50-year old submissive. It looks like she will soon be exploited by Rob and Thomas and she will crave it.