All Comments on 'Jennifer's Exposure Pt. 01'

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Xamphos2018Xamphos2018over 5 years ago
Good opening

Great start looking forward to the rest of the story

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Hot

Very Hot looking forward to Part two

kiwiloverkiwiloverover 5 years ago
Great idea but confusing

This has the bones of an amazing story. Very original at least. It is, however, way too jumpy and for me the transitions in scene are jarring. Nonetheless keen to hear the next installment! Why not take your time and develop each scene just a little more.

AdmulcAdmulcover 5 years ago
Can't wait for the next instalment

Loved the story so far AND particularly the loved your pic in your biography!

I hope you're the Jennifer in the story!

AdmulcAdmulcover 5 years ago
Can't wait for the next instalment

Great story and great pic of you in a bikini in your profile.

Are you the Jennifer in the story?

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Very hot start!

Very hot start and exceptionally well-written.

JoeehartleyJoeehartleyover 5 years ago
Enjoyable story

A bit confusing, but interesting. Can't wait for part 2.

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Your Photo.

I love the photo that you shared for us in your bio. You have a great looking body and the knowing that you have such a great looking figure; will no doubt add to the enjoyment of reading the stories about your exposing yourself.

Thank You for sharing your photo!

AverygoodlayAverygoodlayover 5 years ago
very

disappointing stopping mid-story like that dropped from 4/5 to 3 stars, yes I agree a very great body you have there

AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
will see the next

chapter

AmbulAmbul8 months ago

Great start. I love the fact that Jennifer is a very fit, hot, and busty 50-year old submissive. It looks like she will soon be exploited by Rob and Thomas and she will crave it.

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