All Comments on 'The First Time My Wife Tried Anal'

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An Awful CadAn Awful Cadalmost 19 years ago
Linked sex to characters

Very nice work. Good hot, raw sex and I particularly liked the way you developed the connection between the rawness of the sex and the changes in the relationship and even the personalities of the two characters.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Bravissimo!

Great work! I'm seldom inspired enough to leave comments on this forum; however, yours was well written and developed. I look forward to more.

msboy8msboy8almost 19 years ago
Great Story

I was really inspired by how you told your story and keep taking side trips, then returning to your original thoughts. The use of an editor would help you with some minor problems. Keep Writing!

themonk110themonk110almost 19 years ago
Good Story

I liked the tone, and the details.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great Read

Well written and above all: believeable. Whether true or not, it is just a fantastic piece of work.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
hotttttttttttt

i had my first ass fucking last week.. i know how she felt.. brought back all the nice memories and got me wet .. im going to go fuck myself hard now! THANKS

Booboo71Booboo71over 2 years ago

Great story she enjoys it in her ass now

Ready for chapter two now

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