All Comments on 'Schoolies Week'

Chloe i thorougly enjoy your stories and want to thank your for keeping them fresh and hot at the same time.

There is a tumblr “internetslutclub” and the woman artist who draws it, is amazing, please take a look and you will se how the characters in your stories are very accurately represented there!

I’m Not affiliated to that tumblr or the artist in any way but once i saw her art i immediately associated both your stories and her drawings.

Thanks again for your great work!

Funny and cute coming of age story. The drunk scenes had me laughing away. Loved it.

A rollicking bollocking, Chloe!

The coppers must have been off duty, they'd have booked the boys in the back of the ute ;).

Really? That’s illegal? I saw that in the country outside of Adelaide so I went with it for the story. What about in the back of a panel van?

It's been way too long since I last read any ChloeTzang. I'd forgotten just how hot your stories are. Your stream of concious style is so detailed - like you're recording the firing of every single synapse in the narrator's brain. And just the authenticity in this one. It's hard to believe you're not actually Australian. I mean, maybe a native could pick it apart, but I felt totally emersed as a foreigner.

I imagine a lot of the research got done while you were writing "Dead Heart", but knowing you cranked this story out in less than a week (while organizing the last days of the anthology) just amazes me. I am in awe.

Had to read your story since the sunburned country event was your idea. Great job with the Aussieness. I was waiting for the girls to spend the arvo sculling passion pop on the beach and playing a few rounds of goon of fortune! Fun times. You’ll probably give modern toolies high expectations of actually scoring though ;)

Great fun read, loved the simple joy throughout and thankful that it didn't turn nasty, thank you Chloë. 5*

The Aussie theme just works, and the story is up to your usual standards. The voting system here is broken - I want to give it a ten and it only goes to five.

This is the first of your stories I've read and I thoroughly enjoyed it. The lazy Susan scene was a classic. I don't like to nitpick but you may have gone overboard with the Australian vernacular. A lot of the stuff you used is hilarious but not really in common usage e.g. drongo, root rats etc. I also think you'd be hard pressed to find XXXX beer in Sydney. You almost lost me with the Ute. That would be illegal everywhere in Australia except in someone's paddock. Dux of North Sydney Girls High? Not impressed with their sex education. Birth Control? STDs? I hope she used a condom with Mark.

Good fun story, froth and bubble stuff - well told. Mebbe you could have cut one or two scenes but mebbe not. Well done.

And thanks also for still putting stories on Lit.

I hope we might see Ching Ching and Mark in parts 2-10.

You either have a very active imagination or a wonderful real life.l think the later and am so jealous. Your stories get better and better and I hope your book publishings go from strength to strength, you deserve it for adding so much pleasure to the world.

I was kind of hoping she'd like one well enough...that he'd earn a day or few!

Your research and language is phenomenal.

Now...howzabout the story of your adventures while researching this story? :+))

I'm salivating already! :+)))

Good stuff! when can we expect the next instalments of Mistaken Identity? Really enjoyed it!

I'm planning right not to finish "Shanghai Candy" in January and "The Final Night" in February but when they're available depends on the publisher. After that, I'm planning the first three novels in an erotic SF series ("Penetration Testing", "Protected Access" and "Insertion Force."). Hopefully it'll sell because I have a twelve book series mapped out. On LIT, I'm going to shoot for a story each month through next year, mostly followups on existing series that I've left hanging. Jeong Park, Chinese Takeout and Happy Birthday (2 chapters each in that order). Boiled down, I'm shooting for one 80-100k words novel and one 20-30k story on LIT each month right through next year. About 1.5 million words, writing part-time. Aim high and you might miss, but you'll be closer than if you aimed low. Anyhow, I'm on Facebook and I post a bit more on what I;m doing there, so search for ChloeTzang on FB and Friend me or follow me and you'll get the updates and you can ask away. And push me!!! :)

That was a fun read. Looking forward to what you have next for us.

Have always loved or greatly liked all your stories. This one as well but couldn't keep withh the Aussie talk and slang so i found it a little difficult to keep going.

Just about fell off my chair laughing over this one:

"at least I didn't stand out like a dog's balls"

5*

Is it just me or did Bryce become Lachlan in this story? I could swear the pair were Jase & Bryce in that scene.

laughed myself to tears

Great story as always. You need to add an Aussie dictionary for the terms used though.