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byBill Dada©
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by Anonymous

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by Anonymous05/19/05

Dada

A bit of Dada froma bloke called Dada has to score 5

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by sophia jane05/19/05

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Love it.

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by Jennifer C05/19/05

great stuff

so simple yet sez so much,
this really works,
loved it!
Thanks.
~ J

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by Bridget6905/20/05

You never know...

where your imagination will take you.

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by twelveoone05/20/05

*

What did the sign say?
Bill, welcome back

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by LuciousBi-Writes4U05/23/05

LOL

too cute and too you BD!
good one!
Kisses,
T

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by sweet GA peaches11/10/05

...and it would..NOT

be the same without you!
TESTDRIVE !!! lol...

-sGp-

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by KOLKORE09/18/07

If it's so simple - do the same

Great.Self referential poem creates imagenry small semi cirdular motion which starts at the first line (I took) then lands two lines later right at the lap of the reader (here).I love those poems which force you to read them again, teasing you in their simplicity. If it's so simple - do the same!

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