This is fun, real and I enjoyed it a lot. Ending worked, although it might have been better for her if he was just average, and remove the stigma in her mind that 'regular guys' would be disgusted by her. But I see what the author was going for, and better too small than too big, in this case!!! Really nice story.
I felt that the first part worked out better than the 2nd, but bree was very believable and very endearing. Maybe the bit about being less than well endowed came a little to quickly and the wrap up in the end wasn't drawn out at all.
I love stories that feature people who aren't "supermodel-perfect." I think most people struggle with some sort of fear that they're not "normal"--whatever that is. It seems like many people aren't happy with their bodies and I think that positive stories like this one go a long way towards showing people that they're not defective and that they're worthy of being loved just as anyone else is.
have our little "quirks".."imperfections".The beauty of this story is that All of us can see and understand the vunerability of the characters..for none of us are "perfect"..each of us so unique..the way we were meant to be
There HAS to be MORE to this story, please write it. This story needs finishing, or at least exploration, and that could take many stories .
Good Job,
Rudolfo
I haven't seen a decent (indecent?) story about clits
since "Secrets of the YaYa Dildohood." Thank you very
much. And, as someone already mentioned, let's develop
this theme further.
by
Anonymous08/27/05
c is for clitoris
An other story please
by
Anonymous03/04/06
curious
my partener has I suppose a normal clit so your story on huge clits is a turn on and i would love to see and feel a big one
Many Feathers/The sand man I've eread much of yoru work here and this one is up to your standard defintly.
What makes this one special is its so believable so very real. I don't want to sound cliched but I can really imagine a "Bree", "Jack" and "Alice" even a Dan that I know already.
Reading any of your stories is a delight. This is a masterly treatment of Bree's needs, wants, hopes and fears.
Yet another of your stories that left me wanting to add a + to the score :)
by
Anonymous09/26/06
size definitely does not matter
i loved this story. I've been out with 3 men with small dicks and they have always but always been the best lovers. They compensated with the best cunnilingus and i've never known one of them who couldn't please me. big dicks often come with arrogant owners who have always wanted to go too fast, too hard. i've a large clitty (but not as big as my thumb!) and it is so sensitive. you got this very accurately. Size does not matter, but being sensitive does!
by
Anonymous10/01/07
Mind Blowing!!!
This story is well written, sensual, erotic, and a KEEPER!!! I hope you continue to write like this, but please a page of lusty follow up would have made this story volcanic. Many thanks!
is that large or small, between men and women, they all seem to fit together so well. It's not that--one size fits all, but--all sizes fit one another. Truly marvelous, and your story underscores that point.
It is so good to read a story about a small or normal dick that makes a women happy.
by
Anonymous09/21/14
history of me
I wish I could have found someone as understanding when I was young. I was never exactly rejected, but just had lukewarm reactions to my fairly small penis and testicles. I'd be told that I was 'just fine the way you are' or worse 'its ok, really'. But never like I was just right to please her. I think a large clitoris would be really sexy, as long as it didn't cause her discomfort during her day-to-day schedule. I love sucking on long pussy lips too. I guess I learned to be good at oral sex to make up for my lacking of abundance elsewhere. I think I could have really gotten into Bree, as long as we were compatible otherwise. This is a good story that needed to be told. Also, I'm not sure most people know that many, many women have asymmetrical breasts and so-what. Our physical attributes drive us apart so much. I have epilepsy also, which was kind of frightening to many people back when I grew up in the 60's and 70's. Back then it was called 'having fits' and caused me to feel alone a lot, even with people all around me. Even family. Its too bad that, as in the story, two emotionally damaged people have to stumble onto another emotionally damaged person to even find good sex. Thank you, I didn't know another person would even think of this as a story to be posted to be read by the public.
by
Anonymous02/03/15
Really Enjoyed
Really enjoyed your story as it spoke so directly to me. Having a small cock and being black had been a double whammy most of my life. Needless to say the expectations women (and later men) had, were shattered when I undressed, as even hard I'm just 4". Locker rooms first, then dates, finally marriage and divorce, then anonymous ABS hookups - all just brutal. My 2nd wife is a kind white bbw and as we were getting to know each other I shared the pain of my size with her. She was very sympathetic and encouraging, and as we got intimate she directed me to use my hands and mouth to make love to her chubby body, elongated nipples and oversized pussylips. It's been glorious! The slow buildup to bringing her off with my mouth locked on her cunt while laying with my cock on her rather muscular calves is all I need to cum hard. Kissing her and having my cock mashed against her huge thighs also brings me off.
English
Best Yet!
This is fun, real and I enjoyed it a lot. Ending worked, although it might have been better for her if he was just average, and remove the stigma in her mind that 'regular guys' would be disgusted by her. But I see what the author was going for, and better too small than too big, in this case!!! Really nice story.
sweet story
I felt that the first part worked out better than the 2nd, but bree was very believable and very endearing. Maybe the bit about being less than well endowed came a little to quickly and the wrap up in the end wasn't drawn out at all.
still a very sweet story
Sweet and caring--just perfect.
I love stories that feature people who aren't "supermodel-perfect." I think most people struggle with some sort of fear that they're not "normal"--whatever that is. It seems like many people aren't happy with their bodies and I think that positive stories like this one go a long way towards showing people that they're not defective and that they're worthy of being loved just as anyone else is.
I hope I'll find my own "Bree" someday.
All of us
have our little "quirks".."imperfections".The beauty of this story is that All of us can see and understand the vunerability of the characters..for none of us are "perfect"..each of us so unique..the way we were meant to be
Write More Please
There HAS to be MORE to this story, please write it. This story needs finishing, or at least exploration, and that could take many stories .
Good Job,
Rudolfo
More is Better
I haven't seen a decent (indecent?) story about clits
since "Secrets of the YaYa Dildohood." Thank you very
much. And, as someone already mentioned, let's develop
this theme further.
c is for clitoris
An other story please
curious
my partener has I suppose a normal clit so your story on huge clits is a turn on and i would love to see and feel a big one
Very Believable
Many Feathers/The sand man I've eread much of yoru work here and this one is up to your standard defintly.
What makes this one special is its so believable so very real. I don't want to sound cliched but I can really imagine a "Bree", "Jack" and "Alice" even a Dan that I know already.
oh heck...
Reading any of your stories is a delight. This is a masterly treatment of Bree's needs, wants, hopes and fears.
Yet another of your stories that left me wanting to add a + to the score :)
size definitely does not matter
i loved this story. I've been out with 3 men with small dicks and they have always but always been the best lovers. They compensated with the best cunnilingus and i've never known one of them who couldn't please me. big dicks often come with arrogant owners who have always wanted to go too fast, too hard. i've a large clitty (but not as big as my thumb!) and it is so sensitive. you got this very accurately. Size does not matter, but being sensitive does!
Mind Blowing!!!
This story is well written, sensual, erotic, and a KEEPER!!! I hope you continue to write like this, but please a page of lusty follow up would have made this story volcanic. Many thanks!
The great thing about mating parts...
is that large or small, between men and women, they all seem to fit together so well. It's not that--one size fits all, but--all sizes fit one another. Truly marvelous, and your story underscores that point.
Story telling at its finest.
Very well told, the reader is taken into the story.
All the rest
Like all your other stories, you reel us in, then slap us with something unexpected and beutiful. Koontz and Mary Higgins Clark rolled into one.
Very good
It is so good to read a story about a small or normal dick that makes a women happy.
history of me
I wish I could have found someone as understanding when I was young. I was never exactly rejected, but just had lukewarm reactions to my fairly small penis and testicles. I'd be told that I was 'just fine the way you are' or worse 'its ok, really'. But never like I was just right to please her. I think a large clitoris would be really sexy, as long as it didn't cause her discomfort during her day-to-day schedule. I love sucking on long pussy lips too. I guess I learned to be good at oral sex to make up for my lacking of abundance elsewhere. I think I could have really gotten into Bree, as long as we were compatible otherwise. This is a good story that needed to be told. Also, I'm not sure most people know that many, many women have asymmetrical breasts and so-what. Our physical attributes drive us apart so much. I have epilepsy also, which was kind of frightening to many people back when I grew up in the 60's and 70's. Back then it was called 'having fits' and caused me to feel alone a lot, even with people all around me. Even family. Its too bad that, as in the story, two emotionally damaged people have to stumble onto another emotionally damaged person to even find good sex. Thank you, I didn't know another person would even think of this as a story to be posted to be read by the public.
Really Enjoyed
Really enjoyed your story as it spoke so directly to me. Having a small cock and being black had been a double whammy most of my life. Needless to say the expectations women (and later men) had, were shattered when I undressed, as even hard I'm just 4". Locker rooms first, then dates, finally marriage and divorce, then anonymous ABS hookups - all just brutal. My 2nd wife is a kind white bbw and as we were getting to know each other I shared the pain of my size with her. She was very sympathetic and encouraging, and as we got intimate she directed me to use my hands and mouth to make love to her chubby body, elongated nipples and oversized pussylips. It's been glorious! The slow buildup to bringing her off with my mouth locked on her cunt while laying with my cock on her rather muscular calves is all I need to cum hard. Kissing her and having my cock mashed against her huge thighs also brings me off.
Thanks again for this story,
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