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wow, stunningly sad.
So much..
..in so little
b'brig
very moving
so much said in such
a few words,
Thanks.
~ J
nice......
and the image carries after one finishes the read. little pieces make great openers in poetry books. i'm sure you know what i mean without explaining....again.......very nice piece.......don
Big emotions...
conveyed in a small piece.
Like the evaporation of the snow...
she fades as if never there. I love how you can explain so much in so few words, K. Another brief, but powerful piece here.
Vixxx
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