All Comments on 'Buddy's Billiards'

Someone who can help with some spellings, verb tenses and simple grammar.

If the billiards is to be part of the central theme, you need to pay more attention to describing each shot, missed or hit.

If you wish to simply have a conversation over a pool table - then do that, but ignore the game and focus on the conversation instead.

mixed signals and weak story here.

A bit choppy but pretty good for the first effort. I have read thousands of these Lerotica stories and I marvel at the people whose first comments are like they are Ernest Hemingway of Lee Truman Capote'... I seriously doubt these dopes even read for content. Just get off on snotty comments with no suggestions. Shame some of them don't write anything so we can return the favor Anonymous over 12 years ago.