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Danielle's Shadow Master

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by Xesevoli06/18/05

I see...

... why you're published. I'm usually not into this genre' but after reading I I think it's a great story. Is the female subservient in all of your stories or do you trade off?
Thank you for a new experience and a good story. I hope for more soon and welcome to Literotica... we are fortunate!

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by Anonymous07/04/12

Okay...

I liked the story but it sounds like you took quite a bit from twilight.

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by Anonymous12/02/15

Loved it

Very well written

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