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Family Home Stay Ch. 02

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by msboy805/24/05

Better, more passion

I enjoyed the story immensely.You are building up the relationship well. I'm just trying to figure out when the Asian visitor is going to come in. You advertized it for chapter 01, but he/she never came.

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by Anonymous05/26/05

accuracy?

I like the theme and the anticipation, but I agree with the other comment. This is a bit of false advertising for those of us who love Asian incest.

Also, at one point of the story you say that "summer is over", then later you say that bathing suit season is coming up soon.

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by don8765412/30/05

A good start continued.....

I see a certain progression. I'm wondering as to when they are going to start lusting each other....

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