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congratulations
on another E,
Nice poem, interesting
and thought provoking.
Great stuff.
Thanks.
~ J
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Excellent piece!
What can I say...
...but add to the praise.
b'brig
don't hold your breath
you been reading where a man has only so many breaths in his life and your trying to prolong it? Holding your breath is like damming the river, the flow will flow, till it can flow no more.
mention
in todays poem reviews
congradulations on a green "E"~
Lovely.
Simply lovely. ~Imp
Interresting
A fine example of what a poem can evolve into when you have an idea and take it as far as it can go. Well deserved E.
Why hold back...
and keep things contained when so much vitality can be infused in what you create?
nice.....
and it's a good reason to breathe.......great job.......don
Out of all...
of your quite impressive "E" earned materials, I find this one to be the best, K. It seems your pen took a deep breath and exhaled a fine piece of poetry on this site. A very creative way to express the creativity of the poet. Bravo!
Vixxx
"E"
An "E" that really fits ~
Excellent?
Extraordinary?
writing and breathing,
what's the difference?
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This poem was mentioned in the Archival Review thread, in a picking through Lit's archive of over 36,000 poems.
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