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Oh Yes
YES YES YES!
This one got me hard as a rock, so sexy and exciting! Loved how you have written this and I am gagging for the next part! Thank you for the best wank i've had in ages that was hot!!!
Can hardly wait
for the next chapter, Jennifer. It was fantastic (as usual). Jennifer, I hope you are not writing from experience here - that you were not Shaun. It would gall me to think that you had ever been humiliated in this way - you are too nice a person to have that happen to you. Tell Shaun, though, that next time this happens to her I will personally come and kiss her better (especially on the parts where she has been abused).
I was like your first comment
I, too, had to wank whilst reading this. I always do whenever I read either your stories or your exotic poetry, although I do not do so with your non-erotic poems, which also give me great pleasure.
Please
Please can I change places with Shaun? I guarantee it would not be against my will, but it would make smashing reading.
Teach him !
From her foul mouth I would suspect her to take the lead and teach him a lesson. He needs one.
Is there anyone else in the plot who will ?
Hot Story
Great story, I hope Shauna gets him back, soon. I would like to suggest using an editor. You need to get help with your punctuation and a little spelling too. I'm not trying to be disrespectful, I just would like your wonderful writing to be error-less. Take care and keep writing.
msboy8
Good reading! Very, very erotic!
Shauna needs to keep fucking him and begin thinking about making a baby with him...
Loved the wicked story line.
I have to agree with the comment about the editor. But the essence of erotic writing is coming up with a plot and characters that stimulate and arouse. You have certainly done that! Best wishes and thanks for a very arousing read.
More
Loved Shauna's Diary Jennifer C has a touch for well written NASTY fucking. Give us more.
Made My Cock Hard
Nasty Nasty and HOT. Keep up the good work
love the story
would love to read more of your writings like this
The grammar
or lack-there-of, is a total turn off.
Couldn't read past "worth its wait in gold."
We want more!
Love this style of writing. Please give us chapter 2 and more.
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