I like reading about slaves being punished, but for my tastes this one went too far. The writing itself was good, but I found my stomach turning by the being abused til she bled aspect. Perhaps I'm too conservative?
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Not a bad story...just not my cup of tea
I like reading about slaves being punished, but for my tastes this one went too far. The writing itself was good, but I found my stomach turning by the being abused til she bled aspect. Perhaps I'm too conservative?
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