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Excellent approach on a subject (Horror) combination with erotic. Next time don't be so quick to close as I thought you had a great series here.
Eeeurch!
Fiction aside, I'm damned glad I'm no one Mirk would be intersted in. *shudders*
Intriguing, but...
Great start to an intriguing story. You caught me right away, built me up, and dropped me like a prom date who says no prom night.
You fed the darkness in me and I would love to read more from you.
Different
I've never read erotic horror before. Yours was not too violent for me and the imagery great. Will definitely check out your other stories.
More.
It's dark and sensual and forbidden...much more needs to come of this....
Hope to see more.
Really good story, I hope to read a second chapter.
Aw, c'mon!!
Damn, dude...
MORE violence and definately MORE SEX. Too good of a story line to not deliver more.
OMG!!!
Man u have to write more of that story! It has action, sex, lust all wrapped into one! Please write more! =)
Extremely ..
Enjoyable read. Loved it from start to finish. Finding I have to agree with other's here. It has all the right bits for you to write another.
raoooww
This was some fucking (literally) awesome storie. Please extend on it and perhaps make it so a movie can be made of it. ];-)>
wow
very very very erotic. made me wet myself (in a good way)
Loved it.
SO FUCKING HOT. Taps right into my deepest fantasies.
warned?
Good concept, very erotic, but the fight scene could be handled better than just using a wall of text. Lost my attention a bit there. Also, the warning at the beginning was unnecessary. I was expecting something dark, and was disappointed.
HAWT!!!
Well-written, short and sweet, and it gets the blood flowing. Damn, that's just how I like to play. More Mirk!
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