This is a great start to your story, can't wait for the next chapter
Great start, please continue soon!
Nice basis for the story, just get us a sequel!
Keep this series going!!
Go for another ch. 02 good job good job.
dude. its been a while since ive been excited to see another chapter to this story. When will it be here?? Let us all know! Did a great job!
A plausible theory of mind control. Keep writing and keep the series going.
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Great Start
This is a great start to your story, can't wait for the next chapter
Ditto!
Great start, please continue soon!
Good start!
Nice basis for the story, just get us a sequel!
Wonderful!
Keep this series going!!
nice going pal
Go for another ch. 02 good job good job.
keep it going......
dude. its been a while since ive been excited to see another chapter to this story. When will it be here?? Let us all know! Did a great job!
Nice writing
A plausible theory of mind control. Keep writing and keep the series going.
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