All Comments on 'Sorry Daddy'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
I Loved it!

I like reading stories about fathers and daughters and it totally turned me on! I hope you will be doing more on this subject.(It made me very WET!)

BiskitBiskitalmost 19 years ago
Slut daughter

Fun story. I love reading about slutty little daughters that beg daddy. The spanking and whipping of her tits and pussy was a nice touch but when you pissed in her mouth I jacked off just thinking about it.

I would hope you use an on line editor for your next submission. Keep up the good work. Biskit

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Great

Great story the spanking was exciting. I thought the piss was out of order but thats just my opinion. Keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
dont stop

great story dont stop writing

i would love to help with your fantasy and fuck your arse

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
Quality!

Just wanted to say how much i enjoyed this story.

To say it turned me on would be putting it mildly!

Keep the stories coming.

london_daz_27@yahoo.com

Shanaya1Shanaya1over 14 years ago
Loved it

I loved your stories.Keep on writing

Taiblue1Taiblue1about 14 years ago
Love em

Your stories r great.I hope u can come back 2 write more n that u can just learn 2 block n ignore people that r so rude as 2 send rude comments.Hope all is well with u.Dont give up.These r awesomw.Much love always.:D

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago

I love the piss part!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
very good, but needs a few tweaks

Good story teller, but things that stop the flow for the reader are things like "learnt". This is not a word. It's "learned". Also there are spots where you use "you" & it should be "your" or "you're".

Keep writing.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Nice

I liked it a lot. I liked how you made it seem like I had the power and control...it was quite a turn on. Keep up the great work!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Really liked it!

I liked the story very much - just wish it were longer.

Can't wait to see more

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