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by LuciousBi-Writes4U05/23/05

This Little Green~Eyed Country Girl Agrees!

"Giving it the gas
as I leave
hauling ass
'from'
the Big City!" .......WELL SAID ART MY BUDDY...WELL SAID!!

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by Jennifer C05/23/05

lol

Enjoyed the read,
Thanks Art,
~ J

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by dcpoet4405/24/05

very funny......

and i did this spot:

I can put my arms out
and practically touch
house to house
living on top of one another
crammed so close together
it's a pity
the way they live
in the big shitty.
*********
it makes one wonder what the planners were thinking of when they envisioned it......nicely done.......don

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by Bridget6905/24/05

As someone...

who lives in the city, I must still say that it is often quite shitty indeed.

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