All Comments on 'Office Fuck'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
Confusing!

Your very poor use of English makes it appear as though English is not your native tongue, and yet you have quite a good vocabulary. You have trouble with the tenses of verbs and often use two tenses in the same sentence. Make an effort to enrol in a basic English class or study with an experienced teacher.

simple~ wishessimple~ wishesalmost 19 years ago
slow down a bit also

I felt rushed like you were in a hurry for the reader to finish the story instead of letting the reader wander through it.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
no i loved it

I liked that you got to the point. sex stories with details always get me off. this one made my pussy mucles clench up and throb. best one yet.

puffeduppuffedupabout 17 years ago
got me wet

i love stories about bosses and their secretaries.

you got me stroking my pussy while reading this.

hope you make a part 2.

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