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by don8765405/27/05

Needs a few more chapters

So do they go to her place and decide they want more of each other, keeping in mind that he can produce babies and she might like to have one? Needs more chapters.

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by ~hellbaby~05/27/05

The Story MikeWrites is Hot

But Too Short!!! Good story, thanks

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by Anonymous05/28/05

ahem

so deliciously naughty

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by Anonymous06/11/06

Nice Day at the Beach

I like they way your write your respect for women into your stories...it always comes through.

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